Moment in time
L.g describe your senses in a moment.
S.o.s present tense\precise wording
10 key words
Shining
Rustling
Running
Darkness
Cold
Whispering
Bright
Pajamas
Snapping
Torches
It was a dark night ,dark enough for spotlight. The only thing i can see are the lights of the torches. 123 go!
i am off with heath and jordan running to a brilliant hiding spot.”it is taking awhile to get sorted i thought.” rustling everywhere. The darkness is useful for hiding i thought to myself. the girls are off ,through the bushes and out. When a girl came by me.her shining light is blinding me. Luckily for me and jordan we are not but heath is unlucky.most people are in onesies or pajamas.
everybody is whispering mate”i say to jordan. More girls are coming by they are snapping the branches snap! Snap! snap! Very soon everybody is found except me and jordan! So that’s it we are going to be found but we are still not and i hear male voices! That means me and jordan are in trouble. Its boys and girls onto us two! But we still didn’t get found! In the end i am the winner with jordan!
everybody is whispering mate”i say to jordan. More girls are coming by they are snapping the branches snap! Snap! snap! Very soon everybody is found except me and jordan! So that’s it we are going to be found but we are still not and i hear male voices! That means me and jordan are in trouble. Its boys and girls onto us two! But we still didn’t get found! In the end i am the winner with jordan!
