Dan Carter’s shot                                

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In the Mighty stadium

Dan carter gets ready To shoot

He kicks the ball

Hopes for all

And prevents an all black downfall.

The three little pigs

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Once upon a time There were three little pigs and big But not so bad wolf. They lived in a beautiful  forest with bunnies and cute little duckies One day the wolf looked in the pantry in  for food for lunch, But it was empty so he said after find some food. He went to the first little pig  house, but it was made of straw.  He went up to the door and said, ‘hey Stanley are you in? Wanna have some lunch?”But Stanley said, “go away dog!’ And so he huffed and puffed and blew Stanley's house down.  in the Ruins and he saw lunch , the pig. But he wasn't satisfied. So he set off to Tucker’s house which was made out of sticks he went up to the door and said, “ hey Tucker are you in wanna have some lunch?’’ and he said “ go away bum sniffer!” then he huffed and puffed and blew Tucker’s house down! in amongst the sticks was Tucker and the wolf ate him! But he was not satisfied. The wolf walked up egg’s house and his was made out of bricks then he knocked on the door and said  “hey egg are you in wanna  have some lunch?” but egg said, “go away Flea bitten dog!’’ he was so mad that he climbed through the chimney  and ate egg! And only know was he satisfied with lunch then he went back home and slept for an half an hour!

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