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Dear mr peters

I am writing to inform you about who i think you should choose :labour or national? i think labour and here are three reasons why  

EDUCATION

Do you really think bill english would pay 6 billion dollars our own mental education? No he’ll probably just spend it all on dairy farming like his policies say.Any ways 1.8b of the 6 billion that labour will do  will go to deliver teachers to all of the schools around the country including i hope stratford primary school ( my school.)

Clean rivers

Do you like swimming winston? I bet so you want clean rivers. National’s not doing it so vote for labour. Greens is also an enviroment party so i'll bet they’ll do it to.

Parental leave

Labours going to extend parental leave from 18 weeks to 26 weeks. That’s 8 more weeks! That’s a lot of time! and nationals just thinking of new roads. Really? Roads? Roads are perfectly fine? Aren’t they? Probably don’t choose national.  

In this story i have explained the following things why labour is better

Education, clean rivers and parental leave..

So if you like my story then you should agree with me then vote for labour!

By lucas jacobson

Year 5 room 6

Stratford primary school.