Made of more

L.g +&-

S.o.s 2+ 2-

Made of more, what’s a cloud made of ? answer? Water vapour but this cloud  was made of more than  water vapour.it had personification So personification is something that isn't human that has Similar human attributes. e.g In this case there was a fire and the cloud put it out with Its Rain. The Wind couldn't control him.

Two positives, 1 It describes a word i’ve never heard before and it had a good ending.

Two negatives, 1 not enough detail and not a lot of talking.

I think this film can only be watched by 10-30 year olds. I rate it a 4\5

                 ze legos story

Have you ever wondered where lego started, why it became so popular well if you really want to know read this review. This guy named ole in 1932 in denmark ran a carpentry factory but it shut down and ole lost his wife. Then ole started making wooden toys and his son Godfrey helped him. But then there was a fire and ole’s company called LEGO was decimated. But ole rebuilt his factory and godfrey took over the company. They started making plastic bricks but it wouldn’t stick together so godfrey built bricks with studs and holes in them and godfrey’s son took over and built legoland and that’s the history.

Pro-it tells the proper history of lego. Con-not enough detail.

I think this short film can only be watched by 8-100 year olds. I give this story a 5 out of 5   

Taking Flight- Film Review

S.o.s using a hook in, keywords, positives and negatives, age appropriate, and rating in order. And emotive language throughout the review

This is a short film called ‘Taking Flight’. It's about a young boy looking at a photo of his dad and his Grandpa having fun and then he the young boy and his Grandpa used their imagination.  A  Positive is that it is suitable for little kids and explores  the wonders of your imagination.   A Negative is that it is not really exciting or really motivating for slightly older kids. I think it  is  mainly for 3-7 year-olds.  I give the short film 8.5 out of 10. It's telling us 2 important life lessons: For younger kids use your imagination and for older kids no matter how old you are you can still have fun.

Picture this a robot doing whatever  you want or a car  flying you wherever you want. Obviously you know Technologies are changing as in cars are going to be driving themselves and  phones healing themselves that kind of thing but the Best type of tech that i think should be used more  in the future  Is robots. As we are  kids what would you prefer : robots or flying cars personally I think robots you might not but I do and Here are three reasons why.

P.1 have you Is a kid ever wondered what would be better for you: a flying car or a robot. You should pick robots  because well I know that it would be awesome to fly wouldn't just picture. But just think what if you  fall out of the car while 15000 feet in the air you would die but a robot may not fly but how damn cool  would it be to have a metal person doing whatever you want!!!! # robots for life.

P.2  didya know that there are about 4,000  robots working for the military! Wow! Just imagine a giant metal dude charging at you with a rapid fire shotgun!! You still think flying cars are  cool i mean what do yah think flying cars can do in the military it’s only like a two seater so the pilot and  1 soldier so what's the point and just to clarify what would you rather lose about $1.2 million as in a robot or a life? See robots are better.

P.3 do you know  how many movies have robots in   them, all ages in fact i will tell you them well i'll list a couple in their age group.  Kids movies-  big hero 6,wall-e and robots and teenager to adult movies like terminator, robocop, the matrix and way way way more  including possibly the greatest robot movie series of all time star wars. How many  movies with flying cars are  there huh!  If you said tonnes then there only science fiction so if you wanna watch a movie pick one of the robot ones not booooooring science fiction movies. You obviously want an action packed film with humour have a look at these movies and watch one with robots unless you want to be bored as heck

Concl

In the following paragraphs i have explained the following why robots are better than flying cars: 1 what’s bad about a flying car 2 the military and 3 robot movies if you help me we can make robots a real thing ( i don’t know how.) as in very popular in da future.

L.g have some good ideas and elaborate

S.o.s use good ideas

- elaborate

Dear mr peters

I am writing to inform you about who i think you should choose :labour or national? i think labour and here are three reasons why  

EDUCATION

Do you really think bill english would pay 6 billion dollars our own mental education? No he’ll probably just spend it all on dairy farming like his policies say.Any ways 1.8b of the 6 billion that labour will do  will go to deliver teachers to all of the schools around the country including i hope stratford primary school ( my school.)

Clean rivers

Do you like swimming winston? I bet so you want clean rivers. National’s not doing it so vote for labour. Greens is also an enviroment party so i'll bet they’ll do it to.

Parental leave

Labours going to extend parental leave from 18 weeks to 26 weeks. That’s 8 more weeks! That’s a lot of time! and nationals just thinking of new roads. Really? Roads? Roads are perfectly fine? Aren’t they? Probably don’t choose national.  

In this story i have explained the following things why labour is better

Education, clean rivers and parental leave..

So if you like my story then you should agree with me then vote for labour!

By lucas jacobson

Year 5 room 6

Stratford primary school.

Sps cooks up a feeding frenzy

On monday 11th september year 5 and 6 students cooked up a delicious restaurant experience! The day as filled with table setters,preparing food and  every cook’s worst nightmare:dishes. The atmosphere was absolutely electric buzzing with students. Waiters setting tables here and there and chefs were busy preparing a 3 course meal entree,main and dessert. One of the groups was irish leprechauns. Their menu was Entree: soda bread. Main:irish stew with side dish colcannon and dessert irish style macarons. The irish leprechauns customers thought everything was cooked to immaculate perfection except the customers may have wanted more than one macaron. I took one look in the kitchen and i could barely step in there! everyone was rushing about here and there. I wished i could've  tried the food  it looked amazing. All of the waiters were so polite to their customers just like in a real restaurant. And the clean up everyone had to do dishes  ( i could have sworn there were over 1000!) the tables had to be cleared,spills had to be cleaned. It took ages. But they did it anyway what a day!!        

Mace Windu

l .g Use good ideas and Elaborate.s.o.s  - Good ideas including:  including examples and elaboration.

His Brown skin is as brown as the solid ground. His  eyes are the colour of dirt which helps the grass grow .His head is as bald as a chicken without feathers.

His lightsaber is as purple as a purple minion.

His robes are as brown as his head. His cape is as long as the Great Wall of China.

Master Windu likes to use his lightsaber and meditate which he does with ease.