Albus dumbledore

Albus dumbledore has Shimmering silver hair that is as long as China. He has bright Blue-Eyes the colour of the beautiful blue Sky. Is gravy and as as long as an elephant trunk.

his wand is as Jagged as a tree branch. his robe is as long is the Great Wall of China. his hand is and wrinkly is a grandpa.

Dumbledore is affectionate as my mum on a  lovely sunny evening. Dumbledore is as sensible as a noble can sitting on his throne.

Dumbledore has excelled in Magic which he likes to do with ease  

Scooter crash

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As I go around the corner with my mate Jason. I feel like I'm on a bullet train.we swerve around the senior court and slow down to jump the  stairs. We are at SPS.

We jump the stairs like it was a centimetre drop from a cliff. Then all of a sudden.we stop,put our backs against the wall and push off.

When I jump I feel like a bird that suddenly I lose control and end up body slamming the ground with a mighty thud! (ouch!) “ugh” i winced. “Are you alright?” asked Jason “yeah i’m good” i coughed (not!) “there’s a duty teacher over there” “would you like me to get her?” “yeah sure”  i stuttered when  Jason went to go get the duty teacher I looked at the damage, my elbow was grazed and bleeding, my hand was sore and bleeding, my knee and leg with stinging and that's about it. I started limping / riding my scooter back to class but Jason caught up with the duty teacher. It was Mrs Dombroski . She put a plaster on me and told me to go fix myself up in class. Then I ended up with about 7 plasters on! (ha ha ha)         

        

jeff and bob  

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Once  upon a time    there lived two  Young  men  called jeff and bob. Jeff is boring but handsome  and bob is funny but  ugly they  are Best friends.  The lived in a village with Blacksmiths and  farmers and all sorts.

One day While in a cave mining Jeff discovered diamonds. “whoa” yelled jeff Then Along Came Bob “whoa” muttered bob but suddenly 6 zombies ran in  attacked and killed Bob and turned him into a zombie. They all turned on jeff “noooooooooooooo” wailed jeff. But suddenly jeff thought of good times with bob and smiled so bright that it vapourized the zombies and brang back bob “yay i'm back.” beamed bob “yippee” cheered jeff and they lived happily ever after.