Blood and guts

L.g create a mood of fear|horror

S.o.s language that creates fear

.adjectives- noun

.see/hear

Dear mum and dad

Today i arrived to the sound of bullets raining down beside me. Everybody  dropping dead ,all bloody                                       and screaming in pain . I stood there paralysed in shock for a couple of seconds and then i ran tran  dead bodies as i go. Finally  i got  to the top of  turk hill. 10 of my friends jumped   into a trench, i followed .in the distance i hear screaming and shooting. I started to cry as my friend jack  blacked out as a bullet passed through  his head, and dropped dead. That's when  i lost it, i charged out of the  tears streaming down my cheeks. I was  screaming and shooting and stabbing trying  to avenge my fallen brothers, then it hit me, a bullet passed right through  my leg .i toppled over clutching my broken leg with my bloody hands. I thought i was going to die a horrific tragic death. Because i was screaming in pain so loudly  that i bet people could here me from australia. the n my friend simon came and rescued me then i blacked out. When i woke  i lay there petrified and in pain hoping to get fixed. I looked around i saw my friend murray lying down unconscious. I thought to myself “ i hope he s alright .” i hope i can write back to you soon.

Lucas