jeff and bob  

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Once  upon a time    there lived two  Young  men  called jeff and bob. Jeff is boring but handsome  and bob is funny but  ugly they  are Best friends.  The lived in a village with Blacksmiths and  farmers and all sorts.

One day While in a cave mining Jeff discovered diamonds. “whoa” yelled jeff Then Along Came Bob “whoa” muttered bob but suddenly 6 zombies ran in  attacked and killed Bob and turned him into a zombie. They all turned on jeff “noooooooooooooo” wailed jeff. But suddenly jeff thought of good times with bob and smiled so bright that it vapourized the zombies and brang back bob “yay i'm back.” beamed bob “yippee” cheered jeff and they lived happily ever after.